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¡Hola! Mi nombre es Vivian Ayumi y actualmente soy estudiante de Medicina, ex profesora de inglés y una ávida lectora con pasión por sumergirse en historias. Estoy aquí para ofrecer comentarios honest...
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environmolds
Estados Unidos
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
México
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Países Bajos
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canadá
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
Estados Unidos
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
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Soy un lector apasionado y lector beta con experiencia, especializado en historias de romance, oscuridad, fantasía, thriller, histórica, sobrenatural, isekai, LitRPG y erotismo. Sé cómo se sienten los lectores, qué los mantiene pasando páginas y qué los hace dejar un libro.
Mi objetivo es ofrecer un informe honesto sobre la experiencia de lectura, encontrar inconsistencias y darte sugerencias sobre cómo corregirlas.
Ofrezco comentarios detallados, honestos y emocionalmente fundamentados para ayudarte a mejorar:
- Trama y estructura
- Ritmo
- Legibilidad
- Desarrollo de personajes
- Profundidad emocional
- Huecos en la trama e inconsistencias (+ sugerencias)
- Comentarios generales
- Preguntas y respuestas
Lo que recibirás:
- Un informe de retroalimentación claro y organizado (PDF)
- Resumen de lo que funciona y lo que necesita pulirse
Mi retroalimentación es honesta, respetuosa y constructiva. Estoy aquí para ayudarte a convertir tu manuscrito en su mejor versión, ya sea una historia de romance picante o una fantasía emocional profunda.
¡Hagamos que tu historia brille!
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¿En qué formato debo enviar mi manuscrito?
Preferiblemente Word o PDF, pero también acepto otros formatos.
¿Escribes comentarios en línea?
Lamentablemente, ya no trabajo con comentarios en línea. Te proporciono el análisis profundo escribiéndote un informe.
¿Cuál es la duración del informe que recibiré?
Depende de la extensión de tu manuscrito. Pero aquí tienes una vista previa simplificada: - Paquete básico (manuscritos de hasta 5,000 palabras): alrededor de 4-5 páginas - Paquete intermedio (manuscritos de hasta 50,000 palabras): alrededor de 6-7 páginas - Paquete premium (manuscritos de hasta 100,000 palabras): alrededor de 9-10 páginas
¿Está mi manuscrito a salvo con usted?
¡Por supuesto! No compartiré tu manuscrito con nadie de ninguna manera.
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Vivian is a fantastic beta-reader. My original experience on Fiverr left me really skeptical, but working with Vivian really was my redemption arc. She went above and beyond for her report and was really complimentary on what I had written. I could not suggest Vivian more.
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Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,...
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Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments...
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Vivian was the first reader I ever had for my debut novel and she made me feel right at home reviewing my work. She is eloquent and enjoyed the read. Her critique of pacing and emotional depth was much needed. Also her comments on my 3 act structure was soooo neccesary. I can breath easy now and go into my next edit a happy girl.
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jordanwright96
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Unbelievably detailed analysis and feedback. Vivian is exceptionally proficient in noticing and analysing pacing, and in highlighting areas of the prose that may need tweaking. She explained her reasoning and was just as quick to point out what works as well as what might not work as well. I particularly...
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K k_mzammit
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Vivian is a fantastic beta-reader. My original experience on Fiverr left me really skeptical, but working with Vivian really was my redemption arc. She went above and beyond for her report and was really complimentary on what I had written. I could not suggest Vivian more.
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Útil?B brandynordick
Canadá
Vivian’s feedback was incredibly detailed, honest, and constructive. She highlighted what worked well and what were her favorite parts of the novel, and why, which gave me confidence to keep writing. It was clear she read every chapter with care. Her comments on character development, pacing, dialogue,...
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Útil?A alannaroselynch
Estados Unidos
Vivian went above and beyond with her feedback on my novel. I knew I was asking a lot with a book over 170,000 words, but Vivian met the challenge and then some! Her attention to detail over so much text over a relatively short period of time amazed me. She pointed out phrases I had overused and moments...
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Útil?P paigemcvicker
Estados Unidos
Vivian was the first reader I ever had for my debut novel and she made me feel right at home reviewing my work. She is eloquent and enjoyed the read. Her critique of pacing and emotional depth was much needed. Also her comments on my 3 act structure was soooo neccesary. I can breath easy now and go into my next edit a happy girl.
USD100-USD200
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7 días
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Útil?J jordanwright96
Reino Unido
Unbelievably detailed analysis and feedback. Vivian is exceptionally proficient in noticing and analysing pacing, and in highlighting areas of the prose that may need tweaking. She explained her reasoning and was just as quick to point out what works as well as what might not work as well. I particularly...
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