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¡Hola! Me llamo Vivian Ayumi y actualmente soy profesora de inglés y una ávida lectora con pasión por sumergirme en las historias. Estoy aquí para ofrecerte comentarios honestos y constructivos que ay...
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environmolds
Estados Unidos
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
México
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Países Bajos
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canadá
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
Estados Unidos
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
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¡POR FAVOR, envíame un mensaje directo antes de hacer tu pedido! Te enviaré un PDF con la estructura de mi informe.
Soy una lectora apasionada y beta reader con experiencia, especializada en historias de romance, oscuridad, fantasía, thriller, histórica, sobrenatural, isekai, LitRPG y erotismo. Sé cómo se sienten los lectores, qué los mantiene pasando páginas y qué los hace dejar un libro.
Mi objetivo es ofrecer un informe honesto sobre la experiencia de lectura, detectar inconsistencias y darte sugerencias para corregirlas.
Ofrezco comentarios detallados, honestos y emocionalmente fundamentados para ayudarte a mejorar:
- Trama y estructura
- Ritmo
- Legibilidad
- Desarrollo de personajes
- Profundidad emocional
- Huecos en la trama e inconsistencias (+ sugerencias)
- Comentarios generales
Lo que recibirás:
- Un informe de retroalimentación claro y organizado (PDF)
- Resumen de lo que funciona y lo que necesita pulirse
Mi retroalimentación es honesta, respetuosa y constructiva. Estoy aquí para ayudarte a convertir tu manuscrito en su mejor versión, ya sea una historia de romance picante o una fantasía emocional profunda.
¡Hagamos que tu historia brille!
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FAQ
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¿En qué formato debo enviar mi manuscrito?
Preferiblemente Word o PDF, pero también acepto otros formatos.
¿Escribes comentarios en línea?
Sí, con un cargo adicional, y el monto depende de la cantidad de palabras en tu historia. Por favor, envía un mensaje y te haré un pedido personalizado.
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E essiet08
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Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful...
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Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!
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Vivian is amazing! I messaged to see if she had availability for a quick turn around for a contest submission for the intro of a book and was so happy when she did! In under 24 hours she received, read and gave a concise, conscientious, and detailed report! LOVE her and will be coming back when the book...
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Vivian was great! She responded quickly to my inquiry and was very professional in her response. She even updated me before she sent the full report. Her insights were meaningful and honest. I felt like her direction was solely for the betterment of the story. Exactly what I wished for! I highly recommend her services!!!
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Bulgaria
This is my third time working with Vivian, which by itself should speak volumes! She's a wonderful beta reader who engages deeply with my draft. She also keeps me honest and points out the parts that don't quite land and need more attention, which is deeply appreciated! Thank you, and I look forward to working with you again!
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E essiet08
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Vivian was kindly honest, encouraging and most importantly, truly skilled at the art of writing a novel. There were scene issues that I wasn't sure about but needed some prodding and Vivian completely hit my issues on the spot! I'm so glad I found Vivian, she knows writing! But she's also on time, respectful...
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Útil?T therealnishil
Estados Unidos
Vivian was amazing to work with! This was my first time sharing my work with someone outside my circle, and I was so nervous, but it was absolutely worth it! The level of feedback and detail I got was incredible, as well as the critiques on what could make the story function better. I highly recommend Vivian if you are looking for a beta-reader!
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8 días
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Útil?D daciwrites25
Estados Unidos
Vivian is amazing! I messaged to see if she had availability for a quick turn around for a contest submission for the intro of a book and was so happy when she did! In under 24 hours she received, read and gave a concise, conscientious, and detailed report! LOVE her and will be coming back when the book...
Hasta USD50
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1 día
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Útil?B bcmeyer_13
Estados Unidos
Vivian was great! She responded quickly to my inquiry and was very professional in her response. She even updated me before she sent the full report. Her insights were meaningful and honest. I felt like her direction was solely for the betterment of the story. Exactly what I wished for! I highly recommend her services!!!
USD100-USD200
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5 días
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Cliente recurrente
Bulgaria
This is my third time working with Vivian, which by itself should speak volumes! She's a wonderful beta reader who engages deeply with my draft. She also keeps me honest and points out the parts that don't quite land and need more attention, which is deeply appreciated! Thank you, and I look forward to working with you again!
Hasta USD50
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