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¡Hola! Mi nombre es Vivian Ayumi y actualmente soy estudiante de Medicina, ex profesora de inglés y una ávida lectora con pasión por sumergirse en historias. Estoy aquí para ofrecer comentarios honest...
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environmolds
Estados Unidos
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
México
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Países Bajos
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canadá
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
Estados Unidos
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
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Soy una lectora apasionada y una beta lectora con experiencia, especializada en historias de romance, oscuridad, fantasía, thriller, histórica, sobrenatural, isekai, LitRPG y erotismo. Sé cómo se sienten los lectores, qué los mantiene pasando páginas y qué los hace dejar un libro.
Mi objetivo es ofrecer un informe honesto sobre la experiencia de lectura, detectar inconsistencias y darte sugerencias para corregirlas.
Ofrezco comentarios detallados, honestos y emocionalmente fundamentados para ayudarte a mejorar:
- Trama y estructura
- Ritmo
- Legibilidad
- Desarrollo de personajes
- Profundidad emocional
- Huecos en la trama e inconsistencias (+ sugerencias)
- Comentarios generales
- P y R
Lo que recibirás: un informe de retroalimentación claro y organizado (PDF)
Mi retroalimentación es honesta, respetuosa y constructiva. Estoy aquí para ayudarte a convertir tu manuscrito en su mejor versión, ya sea una historia de romance picante o una fantasía emocional profunda.
¡Hagamos que tu historia brille!
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¿En qué formato debo enviar mi manuscrito?
Preferiblemente Word o docx.
¿Escribes comentarios en línea?
Lamentablemente, ya no trabajo con comentarios en línea. Te proporciono el análisis profundo escribiéndote un informe.
¿Cuál es la duración del informe que recibiré?
Depende de la extensión de tu manuscrito. Pero aquí tienes una vista previa simplificada: - Paquete básico (manuscritos de hasta 10,000 palabras): alrededor de 4-5 páginas - Paquete intermedio (manuscritos de hasta 50,000 palabras): alrededor de 6-7 páginas - Paquete premium (manuscritos de hasta 100,000 palabras): alrededor de 9-10 páginas
¿Está mi manuscrito a salvo con usted?
¡Por supuesto! No compartiré tu manuscrito con nadie de ninguna manera.
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