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¡Hola! Mi nombre es Vivian Ayumi y actualmente soy estudiante de Medicina, ex profesora de inglés y una ávida lectora con pasión por sumergirse en historias. Estoy aquí para ofrecer comentarios honest...
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environmolds
Estados Unidos
Vivian provided an extremely thoughtful and detailed beta reader analysis for my literary novella, *The Marsh Bell*. What impressed me most was not only the...
rhuizaro
México
Time and time again, Vivian has proven her work is the best. She is helping me find the small details I might otherwise overlook, enabling me to iron out any...
adamagito
Países Bajos
Vivian delivered exactly what I was hoping for from a beta read. She actually read the entire manuscript carefully and it shows — her report references specific...
baileybai
Canadá
Vivian was incredibly thorough, thoughtful, and detail-oriented throughout the entire beta reading process. Her feedback was clear, constructive, and gave me...
joshuareynolds2
Estados Unidos
Wow! Just wow. So I put in a request just under a week ago. She had to read some 30,000 words and got it done under the delivery time. Now let's move onto the...
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Soy un lector apasionado y lector beta con experiencia, especializado en historias de romance, oscuridad, fantasía, thriller, histórica, sobrenatural, isekai, LitRPG y erotismo. Sé cómo se sienten los lectores, qué los mantiene pasando páginas y qué los hace dejar un libro.
Mi objetivo es ofrecer un informe honesto sobre la experiencia de lectura, encontrar inconsistencias y darte sugerencias sobre cómo corregirlas.
Ofrezco comentarios detallados, honestos y emocionalmente fundamentados para ayudarte a mejorar:
- Trama y estructura
- Ritmo
- Legibilidad
- Desarrollo de personajes
- Profundidad emocional
- Huecos en la trama e inconsistencias (+ sugerencias)
- Comentarios generales
- Preguntas y respuestas
Lo que recibirás:
- Un informe de retroalimentación claro y organizado (PDF)
- Resumen de lo que funciona y lo que necesita pulirse
Mi retroalimentación es honesta, respetuosa y constructiva. Estoy aquí para ayudarte a convertir tu manuscrito en su mejor versión, ya sea una historia de romance picante o una fantasía emocional profunda.
¡Hagamos que tu historia brille!
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¿En qué formato debo enviar mi manuscrito?
Preferiblemente Word o PDF, pero también acepto otros formatos.
¿Escribes comentarios en línea?
Lamentablemente, ya no trabajo con comentarios en línea. Te proporciono el análisis profundo escribiéndote un informe.
¿Cuál es la duración del informe que recibiré?
Depende de la extensión de tu manuscrito. Pero aquí tienes una vista previa simplificada: - Paquete básico (manuscritos de hasta 5,000 palabras): alrededor de 4-5 páginas - Paquete intermedio (manuscritos de hasta 50,000 palabras): alrededor de 6-7 páginas - Paquete premium (manuscritos de hasta 100,000 palabras): alrededor de 9-10 páginas
¿Está mi manuscrito a salvo con usted?
¡Por supuesto! No compartiré tu manuscrito con nadie de ninguna manera.
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Read my whole book in just a few days, no AI use, wrote a very thorough report at length. She seemed to catch a few things that I didnt even think a reader would catch. My primary intent was to try to figure out what a reader could figure out based on book 1 clues and she got almost all of them, a bit...
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Útil?K kaypro1221
Estados Unidos
Colaboración continuaVivian really read the book closely. She beta read my 170,000 word novel in four separate arcs and not once did I get the sense that she skimmed or jumped ahead. She noted strengths and weaknesses as was not shy to point out issues. She is one of those readers that reads with emotion but also gives the...
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Vivian found little things in my story that won't take readers out of it but could cause some detail-oriented readers to feel frustrated. She also gave me great advice on how to help the pacing of my slow-burn romance hit the best without losing that core part of the relationship. Really loved her thoughts...
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Útil?A adri_writer
Estados Unidos
Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,...
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jo_wu_author
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Vivian is absolutely amazing to work with! I had her read my 21k-word fantasy novella, and in 4 days she delivered a wonderful 6-page report with detailed feedback of what she enjoyed and areas for improvement. Her enthusiasm, kindness, and responsiveness is outstanding, and I will definitely think of her for future projects.
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M melkaven
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Read my whole book in just a few days, no AI use, wrote a very thorough report at length. She seemed to catch a few things that I didnt even think a reader would catch. My primary intent was to try to figure out what a reader could figure out based on book 1 clues and she got almost all of them, a bit...
USD 100-USD 200
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7 días
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Útil?K kaypro1221
Estados Unidos
Colaboración continuaVivian really read the book closely. She beta read my 170,000 word novel in four separate arcs and not once did I get the sense that she skimmed or jumped ahead. She noted strengths and weaknesses as was not shy to point out issues. She is one of those readers that reads with emotion but also gives the...
USD 50-USD 100
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5 días
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Útil?E elle_myren
Estados Unidos
Vivian found little things in my story that won't take readers out of it but could cause some detail-oriented readers to feel frustrated. She also gave me great advice on how to help the pacing of my slow-burn romance hit the best without losing that core part of the relationship. Really loved her thoughts...
USD 100-USD 200
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Útil?A adri_writer
Estados Unidos
Vivian gave me an incredibly thoughtful, detailed beta read. She clearly understood the heart of my story, including why the fast-burn romance works, and her feedback was both encouraging and specific. She highlighted the emotional moments that landed strongest while also pointing out pacing, continuity,...
USD 100-USD 200
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6 días
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Útil?J jo_wu_author
Estados Unidos
Vivian is absolutely amazing to work with! I had her read my 21k-word fantasy novella, and in 4 days she delivered a wonderful 6-page report with detailed feedback of what she enjoyed and areas for improvement. Her enthusiasm, kindness, and responsiveness is outstanding, and I will definitely think of her for future projects.
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