I will be your developmental editor for fiction novel and manuscript critique

Hi, I'm Tommy!

Have you finished writing your fiction novel or manuscript, but feel worried about hidden plot holes, weak character development, or pacing issues that drag down your story?

Typos are easy to fix, but broken structural logic will tank your book launch and lead to negative reader reviews on Amazon KDP.

I am your professional developmental editor and fiction manuscript critic.

I go far beyond basic spelling checks to analyze the core architecture of your story. I read your work meticulously to ensure your plot remains water-tight, your characters feel authentic, and your pacing keeps readers hooked from the very first page.

What You Will Get With This Structural Service:

• Deep structural critique pinpointing logical inconsistencies or plot holes
• Detailed feedback on character voice development, motivations, and growth arcs
• Comprehensive pacing analysis to eliminate boring or rushed chapters
• In-line comments using Microsoft Word Track Changes for clear feedback
• Professional editorial report highlighting your manuscript's strengths

PLEASE MESSAGE ME WITH YOUR GENRE AND TOTAL WORD COUNT BEFORE ORDERING!