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¿Buscas comentarios agudos y perspicaces sobre tu manuscrito de suspense o misterio? Ya sea que estés creando un noir de detective crudo, un thriller psicológico de ritmo lento o un whodunit de ritmo rápido, te ayudaré a perfeccionar tu historia sin comprometer tu voz.
Algunas de las cosas que considero al leer incluyen:
- ¿La apertura crea tensión o intriga inmediata?
- ¿Las apuestas son claras y aumentan?
- ¿Los giros funcionan efectivamente o son predecibles?
- ¿Las motivaciones y acciones de los personajes son creíbles?
- ¿El ritmo es ajustado o hay momentos que se arrastran?
- ¿El final ofrece una recompensa o revelación satisfactoria?
- ¿Hay agujeros en la trama, lagunas lógicas o inconsistencias?
- ¿Qué escenas destacaron como especialmente impactantes?
¿Por qué confiar en mí con tu manuscrito de suspense o misterio?
Soy un lector ávido de ficción oscura y retorcida y sé qué mantiene a los lectores pasando páginas hasta altas horas de la noche. Mi objetivo es ayudar a que tu historia los mantenga adivinando y jadeando hasta el capítulo final.
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Terror/suspenso
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Inglés
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Colaboración continuaMy second novel read by Shannon and her comments are really useful. From what I can see she is able to identify the "blocks" that are missing in the plot or the pacing, and she doesn't get bogged down in detail. Which is exactly what I want from a beta-reader. So to a basic question "Did she provide...
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Colaboración continuaThe review was concise and addressed all the issues I wanted addressing. It is amazingly valuable for and gives me (I hope) all the feedback I need to upgrade the novel. Sharron delivered ahead of schedule which was a great bonus for me. I would like to work with her again
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Shannon's review was very well thought out and will be very helpful as I redraft my novel. She had a strong focus on areas for improvement which demonstrated her insight into the thriller genre.
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drkalliet
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Shannon provided really helpful insights about what worked and did not work with my story. Her work is very affordable for the quality of feedback she offers. I will definitely consider choosing to work with her again!
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W writermg
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Incredibly professional, on time (early, actually), and solid feedback.
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Útil?R rockpoet
Hong Kong
Colaboración continuaMy second novel read by Shannon and her comments are really useful. From what I can see she is able to identify the "blocks" that are missing in the plot or the pacing, and she doesn't get bogged down in detail. Which is exactly what I want from a beta-reader. So to a basic question "Did she provide...
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Útil?R rockpoet
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Colaboración continuaThe review was concise and addressed all the issues I wanted addressing. It is amazingly valuable for and gives me (I hope) all the feedback I need to upgrade the novel. Sharron delivered ahead of schedule which was a great bonus for me. I would like to work with her again
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Shannon's review was very well thought out and will be very helpful as I redraft my novel. She had a strong focus on areas for improvement which demonstrated her insight into the thriller genre.
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Shannon provided really helpful insights about what worked and did not work with my story. Her work is very affordable for the quality of feedback she offers. I will definitely consider choosing to work with her again!
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