I will give you feedback on your TV pilot

I will read your TV pilot and meet with you (over Zoom) to give you professional feedback. Feedback may include notes on structure, character, dialogue, plot development, series arc, et cetera. If needed, we will brainstorm solutions and help you work through 'blocks." This is an "intensive" session, and the goal is to make your pilot as strong as possible. You will receive the same care and attention to detail that I provide my MFA students and industry colleagues. If you choose, we can set aside part of our time to brainstorm other ideas or answer your questions about the industry. It's up to you! NOTE: page count is based on standard industry screenplay format. You can also select "Pitch Deck" as an add-on to this gig.

WHY SHOULD WE WORK TOGETHER?

My work has been produced by a major Hollywood studio.

I teach screenwriting for an MFA program.

I have served on the jury for prominent screenplay competitions.

This session DOES NOT include written feedback. Please read FAQ. If you have questions, I invite you to contact me before ordering. I look forward to hearing from you!