I will beta read your romance novel and give detailed, constructive feedback

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Tailandia

Hablo Hindi, Gujarati, Inglés, Tailandés

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Beta reader and writer!

I’m a media and communications professional with 7 years of beta-reading experience. I’ve reviewed manuscripts and screenplays for independent writers—some now published or adapted for screen. With a ...

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It takes courage to let others read your work and comment on it. So let me congratulate you on taking that step.


I have beta-read books for over 7 years, and I am a reader of various fiction genres. Romance, YA & Erotica are some of my most-read genres. For other genres, please refer to my fiction novel gig on my profile.


As your beta reader, my feedback will include comments on the following:

  • Romance and its believability (For romance genres only, unless otherwise needed)
  • Opening Scene (Whether it hooks me in or not)
  • Characterization (development and motivation)
  • Plot and conflict
  • Pacing/Flow
  • Dialogue
  • Overall Impression


If your novel exceeds 100K words, send me a message for a quote and a custom order.


Before ordering the gig, please send me a message to check my availability. Mention the following when you do:

  • Word Count
  • Genre (and sub-genre if applicable)
  • Story blurb/summary


I have a gig extra if you'd like inline commentary (which is essentially a real-time reaction to the novel as I read).


A gentle reminder that my job as a beta reader does not include editing, nor do I comment on grammar.


If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. Thank you!

Género:

Romance

Idioma:

Inglés

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    parmar_r16

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    Tailandia

    5

    Very quick turnaround. I wanted Pearl to take a look at the first chapter of my romance story and her feedback was very useful and specific.

    USD 50

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    nataligg

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    5

    Really quick turn around and super thoughtful comments via a readers report on the opening chapters of my book. I definitely will be implementing some of the changes that were suggested, to improve my novel even more. Thank you again!

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    pwjamesauthor

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    5

    Highly recommended. Fabulous feedback, helpful and constructive. Very pleased. Thank you.

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    tinytory

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    Reino Unido

    4.7

    Pulparmar was always professional and provided an in-depth analysis to improve my work. Very happy with my order.

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    hpowis

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    5

    Brilliant and detailed feedback to help me move my fantasy series forward.

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5.0

(10)
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(0)
Desglose de calificaciones
  • Nivel de comunicación del Freelancer
    5
  • Calidad de la entrega
    5
  • Valor de la entrega
    5
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  • P
    image-docs

    parmar_r16

    TH

    Tailandia

    5

    Very quick turnaround. I wanted Pearl to take a look at the first chapter of my romance story and her feedback was very useful and specific.

    USD 50

    Precio

    1 día

    Tiempo

    Útil?
    No
  • N

    nataligg

    GB

    Reino Unido

    5

    Really quick turn around and super thoughtful comments via a readers report on the opening chapters of my book. I definitely will be implementing some of the changes that were suggested, to improve my novel even more. Thank you again!

    USD 50

    Precio

    4 días

    Tiempo

    Útil?
    No
  • P
    image-docs

    pwjamesauthor

    CN

    China

    5

    Highly recommended. Fabulous feedback, helpful and constructive. Very pleased. Thank you.

    USD 50-USD 100

    Precio

    Útil?
    No
  • T

    tinytory

    GB

    Reino Unido

    4.7

    Pulparmar was always professional and provided an in-depth analysis to improve my work. Very happy with my order.

    USD 50-USD 100

    Precio

    Útil?
    No
  • H

    hpowis

    GB

    Reino Unido

    5

    Brilliant and detailed feedback to help me move my fantasy series forward.

    USD 50

    Precio

    Útil?
    No