Revisaré en beta tu manuscrito de fantasía con comentarios editoriales detallados
Lectura de beta profesional y retroalimentación editorial
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leh047

Estados Unidos
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her...
echoesofelo

Francia
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped...
juliejeanette23

Estados Unidos
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements...
mssoule

Estados Unidos
Lauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and...
mssoule

Estados Unidos
It’s always great to work with Lauren. This is my 2nd submission with her. She’s communicative, thorough and genuine. Thank you so much!
Acerca de este Servicio
Ofrezco una lectura de beta reflexiva combinada con comentarios editoriales detallados para fantasía, romantasy, dark romance, horror, thrillers psicológicos y ciencia ficción.
Leo desde una perspectiva de lector y de editor, prestando mucha atención a cómo se siente la historia y también identificando qué puede necesitar fortalecerse.
Dependiendo de tu paquete, mis comentarios pueden incluir:
- Reacciones y comentarios en línea del lector
- Análisis de la trama y el ritmo
- Desarrollo de personajes y relaciones
- Comentarios sobre diálogos y construcción del mundo
- Sugerencias de claridad, redacción y flujo de las oraciones
- Sugerencias de revisión y lluvia de ideas
- Un informe detallado para el lector que cubre fortalezas, preocupaciones y prioridades de revisión
Mi objetivo no es simplemente decirte si me gustó tu manuscrito. Explicaré qué funciona, qué me sacó de la historia, dónde me confundí, qué me emocionó como lector y hacia dónde podría profundizar la historia.
Cuando sea útil, ofreceré sugerencias prácticas y posibles soluciones respetando tu voz y la dirección que deseas para tu historia.
No uso IA para leer, criticar ni generar comentarios sobre manuscritos de clientes.
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Informa al freelancer cualquier preferencia o inquietud que tengas con respecto al uso de herramientas de IA en la finalización y/o entrega de tu pedido.
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L leh047

Estados Unidos
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her beta read my work, and the level of depth that she provided was invaluable. She provided in-line comments and a detailed report with feedback on...
USD 100-USD 200
Precio
6 días
Tiempo
M 
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Útil?E echoesofelo

Francia
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped me on the proofreading and beta reading. It was hard to share my manuscript to a stranger but she was very understanding. The time like was also...
USD 100-USD 200
Precio
11 días
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M 
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Útil?J 
juliejeanette23

Estados Unidos
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements via chat. For example, she helped me with ways to make backstory and established worldbuilding clearer while avoiding info-dumps. The...
USD 100-USD 200
Precio
12 días
Tiempo
M 
Respuesta del Freelancer
Útil?M mssoule

Estados Unidos
Colaboración continuaLauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and was willing to answer my questions as we went along. Her comments were all hers and it is clear she does not use AI which is VERY appreciated. I...
USD 100-USD 200
Precio
8 días
Tiempo
M 
Respuesta del Freelancer
Útil?M mssoule

Estados Unidos
Colaboración continuaIt’s always great to work with Lauren. This is my 2nd submission with her. She’s communicative, thorough and genuine. Thank you so much!
USD 50-USD 100
Precio
6 días
Tiempo
Útil?
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L leh047

Estados Unidos
I was so nervous to hand over my first manuscript for review, but I am so glad I did because I loved working with Lauren! This was my first time having her beta read my work, and the level of depth that she provided was invaluable. She provided in-line comments and a detailed report with feedback on...
USD 100-USD 200
Precio
6 días
Tiempo
M 
Respuesta del Freelancer
Útil?E echoesofelo

Francia
Working with Lauren on my first book was a real pleasure! She helped me go through a lot of grammar issues and unnecessary sentences. Overall, Lauren helped me on the proofreading and beta reading. It was hard to share my manuscript to a stranger but she was very understanding. The time like was also...
USD 100-USD 200
Precio
11 días
Tiempo
M 
Respuesta del Freelancer
Útil?J 
juliejeanette23

Estados Unidos
Lauren's edit and critique of my romantic fantasy novel was excellent! She provided many in-line comments, and she was open to sharing and brainstorming improvements via chat. For example, she helped me with ways to make backstory and established worldbuilding clearer while avoiding info-dumps. The...
USD 100-USD 200
Precio
12 días
Tiempo
M 
Respuesta del Freelancer
Útil?M mssoule

Estados Unidos
Colaboración continuaLauren was amazing to work with. She is clearly passionate about helping authors and this showed in every interaction we had. She was responsive, clear, and was willing to answer my questions as we went along. Her comments were all hers and it is clear she does not use AI which is VERY appreciated. I...
USD 100-USD 200
Precio
8 días
Tiempo
M 
Respuesta del Freelancer
Útil?M mssoule

Estados Unidos
Colaboración continuaIt’s always great to work with Lauren. This is my 2nd submission with her. She’s communicative, thorough and genuine. Thank you so much!
USD 50-USD 100
Precio
6 días
Tiempo
Útil?

