I will provide comprehensive notes on your screenplay

Feedback is everything! I am an optioned/repped Screenwriter and college professor. I have won several screenwriting awards and was named a quarterfinalist in the 2024 Nichol Fellowship. I have been teaching undergraduates the foundations of screenwriting for years and I would love to help you get the most out of your draft!

Services include:

• General Notes: Analysis of your story's overall structure, plot, characters, dialogue, tone, style, and theme* with actionable suggestions for revisions.
• Page Notes: Notes on each page and scene to spotlight particular details that are really working or that could use improvement.
• For additional cost, I'll meet with you via Zoom to discuss my notes.

*If there's anything in particular you want me to focus on, just let me know.