Proporcionaré cobertura de guión a nivel de la industria para su guión.

Thanks fo your insight as always.

Incredibly helpful, succinct, and specific feedback. Dan took his time with my script and gave it the attention it needed, and has given me valuable insight as to how to improve it.

He provides very detailed notes on what worked and what didn't work in the draft I have. He gave me enough to work on the draft and make it really work!

He put in some good pointers on issues with the story as written. I'll have to go back and look into them.

Dan is a nice guy, and clearly keen to help, but compared to other readers and services I use, I found the coverage sparse, not (in my opinion based on years of getting coverage) of industry standard, and lacking any 'in depth' insights into the project (good or bad) - as promised. Again, nothing against Dan personally but I won't be using him again.