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Hablo Inglés

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¡Un narrador que ayuda a otros a pulir sus manuscritos!

¡Hola! Soy Kimberly. Soy escritora y editora profesional. Cuando no estoy escribiendo o estudiando narrativa, suelo estar leyendo o revisando libros en línea. La lectura es mi mundo. Escribir es mi m...

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Has terminado tu manuscrito, lo has leído hasta que las palabras se mezclan y necesitas una mirada fresca para llevarlo a su máximo potencial. Buenas noticias: soy tu persona.


Con mi experiencia en escritura y edición, prometo ofrecerte retroalimentación extensa que incluye un análisis profundo con sugerencias claras y accionables para mejorar.


  • Introducción/Final
  • Punto de vista/Voz
  • Personajes
  • Ritmo/Flujo
  • Diálogo
  • Escenario
  • Vacíos en la trama y inconsistencias
  • Fortalezas y áreas a mejorar


Recibirás: comentarios en línea con mis reacciones mientras leo y un informe detallado de varias páginas con retroalimentación constructiva.


Mientras leo, me hago estas preguntas:

  • ¿Fue la historia atrapante desde el principio? Si no, ¿por qué?
  • ¿Hay algún momento en que el ritmo parezca demasiado lento o rápido?
  • ¿Hay partes de la historia que me confundieron?
  • ¿Existen inconsistencias?
  • ¿Es el escenario inmersivo?
  • ¿Los personajes y sus acciones/dialogo parecen auténticos?
  • ¿El estilo de escritura se ajusta al público objetivo/género?
  • ¿El final es satisfactorio?


Géneros preferidos: ficción juvenil y adulta (fantasía, romance, thriller, paranormal, misterio, aventura, litrpg, relatos cortos, horror), no ficción, filosofía


No uso IA en absoluto.

Género:

Acción

Ficción literaria

Misterio

Romance

Ciencia ficción

Idioma:

Inglés

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    hannahpascoenz3

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    3.7

    Kimberly was lovely to work with and was amazing when she was unable to deliver on the expected date in offering a partial refund. What I liked is that she was genuine which is real hard to find these days in the world of AI scammers. When her feedback came through, it was reall good as there was a report...

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    heather_ya

    US

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    5

    Finding a beta reader like Kimberly is genuinely rare. She got the work. Like, actually got it. Her notes (good and critical) were sharp and honest without hiding behind politeness. That's the exact energy I need from a beta reader. So glad she said yes.

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    elainagh

    US

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    5

    Kimberly returned me an amazing reader report/in-line commentary on my novel. She has a perfect balance of being encouraging and critical where she needs to be. Her attention to detail is fantastic. You can tell she takes her work seriously, and respects the author's work as well. She paid attention...

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    4 semanas

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    syddsthefool

    US

    Estados Unidos

    4.3

    Although my order took much longer than expected, Kimberly’s attention to detail and care with my manuscript made the wait worth it. She gave me a lot of things to think about, directions I could go in, etc. Her in line comments were extremely helpful and the reader report was quite thorough.

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    6 semanas

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    miriamjeon

    US

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    5

    Kimberly is great! The stream of consciousness inline comments are wonderful, as well as the analysis outline provided. There is no AI usage whatsoever, something I was specifically watching out for while searching for beta readers. I chose Kimberly because it was abundantly clear she was a real person...

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    hannahpascoenz3

    NZ

    Nueva Zelanda

    3.7

    Kimberly was lovely to work with and was amazing when she was unable to deliver on the expected date in offering a partial refund. What I liked is that she was genuine which is real hard to find these days in the world of AI scammers. When her feedback came through, it was reall good as there was a report...

    USD100-USD200

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    4 semanas

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    heather_ya

    US

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    5

    Finding a beta reader like Kimberly is genuinely rare. She got the work. Like, actually got it. Her notes (good and critical) were sharp and honest without hiding behind politeness. That's the exact energy I need from a beta reader. So glad she said yes.

    USD100-USD200

    $

    2 semanas

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    Útil?
    No
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    elainagh

    US

    Estados Unidos

    5

    Kimberly returned me an amazing reader report/in-line commentary on my novel. She has a perfect balance of being encouraging and critical where she needs to be. Her attention to detail is fantastic. You can tell she takes her work seriously, and respects the author's work as well. She paid attention...

    USD100-USD200

    $

    4 semanas

    Tiempo

    Útil?
    No
  • S

    syddsthefool

    US

    Estados Unidos

    4.3

    Although my order took much longer than expected, Kimberly’s attention to detail and care with my manuscript made the wait worth it. She gave me a lot of things to think about, directions I could go in, etc. Her in line comments were extremely helpful and the reader report was quite thorough.

    USD100-USD200

    $

    6 semanas

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    Útil?
    No
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    miriamjeon

    US

    Estados Unidos

    5

    Kimberly is great! The stream of consciousness inline comments are wonderful, as well as the analysis outline provided. There is no AI usage whatsoever, something I was specifically watching out for while searching for beta readers. I chose Kimberly because it was abundantly clear she was a real person...

    USD50-USD100

    $

    8 días

    Tiempo

    Útil?
    No