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¡Hola! Mi nombre es Kristopher y me apasiona la corrección de estilo, la revisión y la lectura beta/desarrollo editorial. Recientemente (noviembre de 2021) obtuve mi certificado en corrección d...
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Mientras leo ficción, busco algunas cosas:

  • Cositas que me sumergen en la historia. Estas me ayudan a mantener la suspensión de la incredulidad.
  • Cositas que me sacan de la historia. Estas evitan que me sumerja completamente mientras leo.
  • Cositas que me encantaron. ¿Qué te emocionó de tu historia?
  • Cositas que no funcionaron para mí subjetivamente.


Como tu beta reader, me esfuerzo en ofrecerte tanto feedback positivo como constructivo. Quiero destacar los elementos que ya son fantásticos y también las partes que podrían beneficiarse de más ajustes.

 

Te animo a incluir preguntas específicas para que pueda responder en el informe del lector. ¿Te preocupa que el desarrollo de la trama en la página x sea demasiado predecible, o que el personaje principal parezca antipático o poco interesante? Por favor, dime.

 

Mientras leo, me haré preguntas como:

 

  • ¿Son los personajes interesantes y creíbles?
  • ¿Suena natural el diálogo?
  • ¿Hay agujeros en la trama u otras inconsistencias?
  • ¿Es satisfactoria la conclusión?

 

A partir de este proceso, desarrollaré feedback basado en lo que funcionó y no funcionó para mí, usando ejemplos concretos de tu historia.


¡Estoy emocionado de saber de ti!

Género:

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Terror/suspenso

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Inglés

Preferencia de estilo de entrega

Informa al freelancer cualquier preferencia o inquietud que tengas con respecto al uso de herramientas de IA en la finalización y/o entrega de tu pedido.

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    tessa2023

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    5

    This is my second time working with Kristopher, and he was just as great as the first. I love his candor and love his comments which I will adopt to improve my manuscript. I love it that he doesn't unnecessarily flatter while pointing out what he thinks works. Thank you so much Kristopher :) really appreciate your insightful comments and detailed notes.

    USD50-USD100

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    4 semanas

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    tessa2023

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    5

    Kristopher made insightful comments and pointed out to flaws that I hadn't noticed. He was candid about what I needed to work on and gave me tips to make my manuscript stronger. Thank you so much!

    USD100-USD200

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    4 semanas

    Tiempo

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    feliciawestrick

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    5

    This is my second time working with Kris. I'm happy to recommend him to anyone in need of a beta reader. His in-line comments are concise and thoughtful, and his opinions helped strengthen my manuscript.

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    ellewritestuff

    US

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    5

    Kris did an amazing job providing feedback on my novel. He thoroughly answered all my questions and provided input on all the points I requested. He also suggested areas where I could improve the story. His feedback and comments were clear and easy to understand. He brought insight into areas I hadn't before considered. Very helpful!

    Útil?
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    feliciawestrick

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    5

    Kris is an excellent beta reader who utilizes in-line commentary to deliver corrections and feedback. This method makes post-beta edits a breeze for a writer. He's also incredibly thorough and concise. My book is better because of him.

    Útil?
    No
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39 comentarios sobre este Servicio
5.0

(38)
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(0)
(0)
Desglose de calificaciones
  • Nivel de comunicación del Freelancer
    5
  • Calidad de la entrega
    5
  • Valor de la entrega
    5
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Más relevante
  • T

    tessa2023

    US

    Estados Unidos

    5

    This is my second time working with Kristopher, and he was just as great as the first. I love his candor and love his comments which I will adopt to improve my manuscript. I love it that he doesn't unnecessarily flatter while pointing out what he thinks works. Thank you so much Kristopher :) really appreciate your insightful comments and detailed notes.

    USD50-USD100

    Precio

    4 semanas

    Tiempo

    Útil?
    No
  • T

    tessa2023

    US

    Estados Unidos

    5

    Kristopher made insightful comments and pointed out to flaws that I hadn't noticed. He was candid about what I needed to work on and gave me tips to make my manuscript stronger. Thank you so much!

    USD100-USD200

    Precio

    4 semanas

    Tiempo

    Útil?
    No
  • F

    feliciawestrick

    US

    Estados Unidos

    5

    This is my second time working with Kris. I'm happy to recommend him to anyone in need of a beta reader. His in-line comments are concise and thoughtful, and his opinions helped strengthen my manuscript.

    Útil?
    No
  • E
    image-docs

    ellewritestuff

    US

    Estados Unidos

    5

    Kris did an amazing job providing feedback on my novel. He thoroughly answered all my questions and provided input on all the points I requested. He also suggested areas where I could improve the story. His feedback and comments were clear and easy to understand. He brought insight into areas I hadn't before considered. Very helpful!

    Útil?
    No
  • F

    feliciawestrick

    US

    Estados Unidos

    5

    Kris is an excellent beta reader who utilizes in-line commentary to deliver corrections and feedback. This method makes post-beta edits a breeze for a writer. He's also incredibly thorough and concise. My book is better because of him.

    Útil?
    No