Jesselourey

Developmental Editor & Proofreader

Book for the Planet • Freelance

Jan 2022 - Jan 2026 • 4 yrs

I am a professional book editor and proofreader specializing in romance novels, YA fiction, fantasy, memoirs, and other fiction/nonfiction manuscripts. With over 4 years of experience helping authors transform their manuscripts into polished, publication-ready books, I focus on developmental editing, line editing, and proofreading. Specialized in developmental editing, line editing, and proofreading to improve story structure, pacing, grammar, sentence clarity, character arcs, and narrative consistency. Helped authors transform rough drafts into polished, publication-ready manuscripts for digital and print publishing platforms such as Amazon KDP. Delivered detailed editorial reports, tracked edits, and actionable recommendations focused on improving readability, emotional depth, and overall storytelling impact. Recognized for precision, professionalism, and ability to maintain each author’s unique writing style. My Achievement: Edited over 30+ novels and manuscripts with consistent 5-star client feedback Delivered professional, publication-ready manuscripts for romance, YA, fantasy, and memoir authors Skilled at improving story flow, emotional impact, and reader engagement Skills & Services: Proofreading & Grammar Correction Developmental Editing & Story Structure Line Editing & Sentence Flow Improvement Plot, Character, & Dialogue Enhancement Manuscript Polishing for Publishing Let’s transform your manuscript into a polished, publication-ready masterpiece! Click ‘Order Now’ or message me today, and together we’ll bring your story to life.

Beta Reader & Manuscript Consultant

Book City • Freelance

Feb 2019 - Sep 2021 • 2 yrs 7 mos

I'm a professional beta reader and manuscript consultant working with indie authors and self-publishing writers across Romance, Fantasy, Dark Romance, YA, Thriller, Horror, Sci-Fi, and Contemporary Fiction. Provide in-depth manuscript evaluation focusing on plot clarity, pacing, character development, dialogue flow, emotional impact, and reader engagement. Offer honest, structured feedback to help writers identify weaknesses and strengthen their storytelling before editing or publishing. Assisted authors in refining early drafts into stronger, more engaging manuscripts suitable for Amazon KDP and self-publishing platforms. Known for clear communication, detailed notes, and practical suggestions that improve overall story quality while preserving the author’s voice. Key Skills & Services: Beta Reading & Manuscript Evaluation Plot, Pacing, and Story Flow Feedback Character & Dialogue Analysis Tone, Clarity, and Readability Checks Actionable Suggestions for Story Improvement Want honest, actionable feedback that makes your story shine? Click ‘Order Now’ or message me today, and let’s take your manuscript to the next level!