I'm Crystal.
Not gonna lie, I'm picky. I notice when a character's eye color changes halfway through. I spot that extra space before a period. I catch sentences that sound fine until you read them out loud and go "wait, what?"
I do two passes. First one is for the big stuff pacing, consistency, things that don't make sense. Second one is for every comma, typo, and weird wording. Then I send it back with comments so you can see what I changed and why.
I don't mess with your voice. I just clean it up so readers stay in your story instead of getting yanked out by mistakes.... Lee más